So I'm writing this story?

I'm writing this story called bloodspell well I've put this question on here many types but seem to keep changing my story so here goes it's about a guy named morphious who is a pureblood vampire who is training to become a slayer but his world starts to change when he misses a very important ritual that could determine what he turns out to be and to top that off this guy named Marius is somewhat in love with amorphous but this all changes when morphious finds out that Marius is evil and sinnister he plans to take over all pure bloods but to his surprise Marius has a twin brother named mardrius who seems evil but he is very good he has love for morphious that morphious never knew he had and so they embark on a journey to find other purebloods to go at war with Marius's army morphious better hurry before the bloodmoon or else. The fate of all pure bloods will be lost he must destroy Marius before the bloodmoon or there will be a huge war that will rage between the purebloods and the other team of dark vampires this story is filled with blood terror suspense horror love romance desire hate destruction fire betrayal and violence does this sound like s good story that a reader would sink thier teeth into